09. not quite sex

Her chest moved sinuously against his in time to the music. Her eyes, glittering and dark under her heavy mascara, watched him carefully. She bit lightly at her bottom lip, a hint of even white teeth against red lipstick.

He wanted to laugh. She was so obvious. But she knew what she wanted, he'd give her that, and he'd be lying if he said he wasn't interested. “Oppa,” she murmured, and he couldn't hear her under the music, but he could read her lips. Heat sparked through him, sudden and welcome.

It had been a while.

2000+ words of foreplay and no actual sex! Of the five sections planned for Donghae's hetsex fic, I'm at 1.5. Nice. Apparently Donghae sleeping with girls is going to be long, elaborate, and filthily detailed. Help me imbue it with more Donghae personality and charm! :(

the writing woes of porn

So I’m writing a Donghae hetsex fic because, I don’t know, this urge struck me out of nowhere. It is turning out a lot more epic and a lot slower than I’d originally anticipated.

→At lunch, fic status was thus: 2000+ words of foreplay and no actual sex! Of the five sections planned for Donghae's hetsex fic, I'm at 1.5. Nice. Apparently Donghae sleeping with girls is going to be long, elaborate, and filthily detailed.

→ A few hours later:

happy together ♪: *rolls* oh god donghae, TAKE OFF HER SHIRT.
lee sungmin: LOL
happy together ♪: seeeeriously why are they going so slooooow?! *mopes*
happy together ♪: donghae the gentleman. *grumps*
lee sungmin: this is what you get for writing him cute.
lee sungmin: you should have just stuck to hot and made him a man whore
happy together ♪: he should be more of a slut, trufax. lol.
lee sungmin: you'd be finished already.
happy together ♪: lol HE'D be finished already.
happy together ♪: 5x over.
lee sungmin: somewhere, Donghae is cursing your inability to just make him a slut.
happy together ♪: :'(
happy together ♪: donghae and his blue balls.
lee sungmin: lmfao

black_goose is clearly unsympathetic. :(

( More complaints and updates under cut! )

SO IN CONCLUSION: writing het sex is hard when girls, for some inexplicable reason, don't want to take their clothes off around Donghae. Crazy. Anyway, dinner break now, so Donghae's epic quest to get naked and have het sex must wait a little longer.